The Deep
Question time!
What creature can you see in the picture? A whale ( that will eat you )
How many people can you see? 1
How do you think the person in the picture is feeling? Creeped out
What might happen next? The whale will swim away What other creatures might live in the ocean nearby? Sharks, fish, turtles, and dolphins
Perfect picture!
Look carefully at the photograph and imagine you could zoom out. What might be happening just underneath the shark/beside the man/close to them in the water? Write or draw what you think!
Sentence challenge!
Using your senses is a great way to make your writing exciting! Imagine you could hear what was happening in this picture. Which 'sounds' words would describe what was happening? (eg. splash,
gurgle...) Imagine you could feel the water and the whale. What describing words would tell the reader what they both feel like?
Sick sentences!
These sentences are ‘sick' and need help to get better. Can you help? You might be able to use some of the words you have thought of for number 1!
► The man was snorkeling next to the giant fish that looked like it would gobble you up in one gulp.
The giant fish was swimming in the dark, deep creepy sea.
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